This is my writing of The Visitor, we had to write about a moment in time hope you enjoy it.
One day there was a festival and was going to be packed but they never knew what it was. When everyone got there, they had popcorn and coke and all kinds of snacks. After they arrived the announcer said that they had to wait for a few minutes for the visitor to get ready, so the audience was complaining and a kid said “ did we just waste our time for nothing. One of the adults said “ give our money back” until when all of the audience turned their back and they heard big heavy footsteps,then they turned the back slowly like they were in a horror movie and they were all surprised they regretted what they said to the host but the host forgave them. When they looked back they saw this big robot that looked like a transformer staring at them.
Kia ora keisomani, My name is Milo from room 25. I really liked your story because it was cool and scary. I remember I made a story like this on Pobble 365 Have yo ever regreted going to a festival? ANyways, Thanks for sharing your blog. Blog ya later! P.s, check out My Blog Bye!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Hazel-Grace and I am in Room 24 at Owairaka District School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post about the visitor because of the way you described the footsteps with the word heavy.
I remember when I did something like this you should check out my blog to see it.
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Have you ever tried using a metaphor?
Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog.
Blog you later,
.Hazel-Grace.