I was a pupil at Wesley Intermediate and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Wednesday, 3 April 2019
may road challenge
we have been learning about Annie from may road school to do her really awesome poem. When we had to the poem there were 5 words to write in the poem so this is what i did and they were oxygen wolf kumara BFF experience.
Hello Keisomani. It is me Lucas. That is a very good story and scary I never knew that some one would do a Kumara for a science project. Who is your BFF is it me? Come cheek out my blog @ https://odslucasc.blogspot.com/. Later bro By Lucas.
Great story Keisomani! I like how you used the five words you were challenged to use. Maybe next time you could check for capital letters. And maybe next time you could make your writing bigger to stand out. What did you enjoy about this challenge? Keep up the blogging!
Kia ora Keisomani, My name is Luke from Rm24. I really liked your poem and you did make a good poem using those five words and that would be pretty challenging for me and you did it, Great job! My blog https://odslukea.blogspot.com/
hello Keisomani I am Ryan from next door.I really liked your poem about your Bff and you making a experiment on a kumara.Then when it was finished a bad wolf came and was smelling your bff.Oh and who is your bff.Blog you later boyy.By Ryan room 24.
Hello Keisomani. It is me Lucas. That is a very good story and scary I never knew that some one would do a Kumara for a science project. Who is your BFF is it me? Come cheek out my blog @ https://odslucasc.blogspot.com/. Later bro By Lucas.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Keisomani! I like how you used the five words you were challenged to use. Maybe next time you could check for capital letters. And maybe next time you could make your writing bigger to stand out. What did you enjoy about this challenge? Keep up the blogging!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Keisomani, My name is Luke from Rm24. I really liked your poem and you did make a good poem using those five words and that would be pretty challenging for me and you did it, Great job! My blog https://odslukea.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteSup Keiso, it is bitner here, nice poem it looks really hard I think I have done something like this before. Who is your BFF me or Lucas.
ReplyDeleteIt is me Bittner. Bye see you later
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ReplyDeletehi guys thanks for writting comments on mine i will reply on yours
ReplyDeletehello Keisomani I am Ryan from next door.I really liked your poem about your Bff and you making a experiment on a kumara.Then when it was finished a bad wolf came and was smelling your bff.Oh and who is your bff.Blog you later boyy.By Ryan room 24.
ReplyDeletehi I like your worke can you check on my blog pleas
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